Eleanor – Editing (and a trip to see the Mormons)

Well, I’m back from my trip to Melbourne! That was damn fun, and The Book of Mormon was hella funny. It was not as I expected. I thought the musical would be more like the South Park episode, “All About Mormons”. Not that that’s a complaint. The show was damn good, and I highly recommend you go see it! But if you can’t, definitely get a hold of the soundtrack.

Check out some of the tracks below. Turn It Off is pretty damn amazing.

I also visited one of my favourite places, The Cornish Arms, in Brunswick. I tried the vegan chicken burger. It was a-mazing, but I swear they used vegan duck this time around, haha!

Can’t say no to awesomeness like this…

or this…

I also got to visit one of my favourite Thai restaurants, Thai Puka in Albury. They have the best Tom Yum and Panang Curry I’ve ever had!

Anyway…

Now onto Eleanor:

I have been working on editing and formatting. It is going really well, I must say, and has given me more motivation and confidence in the project. I admit that while the goal tracker was helping me put down the words, it wasn’t helping as much as simply editing and proofing. I should have been focusing more on this aspect, because when I was forcing myself to flesh out the story, I was pushing Eleanor to places I didn’t want it to go.

You may remember that I was initially working on Eleanor in parts, and was planning to format it as such. Instead, I have decided to give each part its own chapters. I think this will help you, the reader. I mean, that’s something I prefer as a reader also. It certainly helps when I plan to read only a chapter before bed… or ten… or the entire book. You know how it goes!

I’m really proud of how far this project has come along, in a relatively short time. National Novel Writing Month has been a big part of that, and I owe my thanks to the program. So, thank you!

So… I will continue in this fashion with Eleanor, as it seems to be the most effective for me… at this stage. Of around 280 or so pages, I have managed to edit only 60 odd. So, it’s going slow, as is expected, but I’m getting through it faster than I was with my goal tracker the other week. That’s not to trash the tracker, or anything. It is a very useful tool. I simply think that I’ve gone as far as I can, story wise, with Eleanor. Really, I could create a new tracker, but with editing and formatting in mind, rather than a word count. Perhaps I will consider that.

I still would like to finish before heading off to Perth (on the 15th!!!), but I don’t think that’s realistic at this stage… but we’ll see. We’ll see. I can be an editing machine when I need to. All those years subbing and proofing will come in handy, haha!

I’m working on chapter three at the moment. Eleanor has just been kicked out of the university. I’ve been advised to build up to this a little more, and I think that could work, but considering the character of the lecturer — who kicks Eleanor out — it seems more in his nature to blast Eleanor upon first sight. This probably isn’t making much sense for you guys right now. I’m having trouble knowing what I should or should not reveal at this stage.

The ending is the only problem right now. I’m still unsure what exactly I want. I have some ideas. During the goal tracker weeks, I was getting a little too complicated with the ending. I think it just needs to be simple. Simple is better.

Oh, and Henry. I’m still working on making him more three-dimensional. I have a plan for than. I have a plan!


Thanks for keeping up to date with all things Eleanor!

Got a question about Eleanor? Post it below or send a message through the contact form.

Did you miss last week’s post? Check it out here.


Stay tuned for another update…

Want to learn more about my NaNoWriMo project? Check out my Eleanor page

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Check out my writing moods for Eleanor with my Eleanor Spotify playlist

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Eleanor – Intermission

I have been advised to take a break from work as I get my head together. That means I have stopped working towards my goal with National Novel Writing Month‘s goal tracker. I am quite sad about that, but I think it’s for the best right now, as I seem to be steering in the wrong direction with Eleanor. I need to step away, then come back to it with fresh eyes.

During my goal tracker venture,  I had been finding that I was at war with myself over the plot and story of Eleanor. Things were becoming a little too complicated in the story, so I am hoping to pull it all back and get it on track to where I wanted it originally, which may mean Eleanor working better as a novella. This isn’t set in stone. Throughout my drafting processes, I will be fleshing everything out more, BUT the story itself is shorter than I anticipated originally. I don’t want to sacrifice integrity in order to get it to novel length which, I am afraid, I am doing. So, no! No, Cadence, no!

So, I have ended my goal tracker… on 9,212 words. Still, it’s not bad, but now I’ll have to wade through all of that and see what is salvageable.

So far during the intermission, I have been working on editing, and formatting. The formatting work is mainly to get me excited and motivated about the project more, and to get a feel for how the manuscript may be printed – I am still undecided about traditional vs self-publishing. Self-publishing seems to be more suited to this project, but that doesn’t mean I will discount traditional. Have you noticed that I’ve been going round in circles? Haha!

I am also unhappy with my character, Henry. He’s not where I want him to be, so my plan is to work on some short stories, or write from his perspective on each of his scenes with Eleanor. At the moment he’s okay, not brilliant though, so I want to get him as close to brilliant, or perfect, as possible. I have been directed towards some works (and characters) by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle to get a better idea of where Henry should be. So… more added to my TBR pile, or bookcase(s) rather.

And so we move on to reading. During the intermission, I have been getting stuck into some books – that’s not to say I haven’t been reading at all during my writing. I have, but some books are too difficult to get through, because of spelling/grammatical errors, and I found I was spending my leisure time doing markups (because, you know, I have to do that!), instead of enjoying the book.

I am finally finishing Lili St. Crow’s A Tale of Beauty and Madness series, with Kin. It’s been a really interesting series (Nameless will always be my favourite), and I love the author’s creativity and writing style. I am certain Lili St. Crow (or Lilith Saintcrow) is annoyed by how many times I ask her to write more of this series, haha!


Then I’ll move on to The Witcher series. It’s been a while since I’ve read about Geralt’s adventures.


Thanks for keeping up to date with all things Eleanor!

Got a question about Eleanor? Post it below or send a message through the contact form.

Did you miss last week’s post? Check it out here.


Stay tuned for another update…

(which may or may not include my adventures in Melbourne!)

Want to learn more about my NaNoWriMo project? Check out my Eleanor page

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Check out my writing moods for Eleanor with my Eleanor Spotify playlist

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Eleanor update – Week 2 of goal tracker

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It is Day 11 (well, Day 12 by the time this is published) of my NaNoWriMo goal tracker.

Goal tracker word count: 7,893
Goal tracker goal: 20,000
Total word count:
 62,621
End goal:
74,728

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I’ve been asked where this awesome tool can be found. Check out the National Novel Writing Month website here http://www.nanowrimo.org and create an account. Good luck!

Somehow I managed to reach my targets for this week. I have no idea how that happened. Between watching Gopher’s complete playthrough of The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt, Alanah (Charalanahzard) Pearce’s complete playthrough of Until Dawn, and this awesome video of a sand spider trying to hide (video below), I had very little time to myself to get these words down. It’s been crazy, I know. I’m just so busy. But I did it! 5,000 odd words isn’t too bad given I’d be struggling to meet that without the tracker. I love this tool, I really do, and I will continue to use it throughout my drafting process with Eleanor.

Although I am not 100% happy with what I’ve written, at least there’s something there for me to work from. Who knows? I might end up deleting the whole 20,000 words I am to write this month, but we’ll see. We’ll see.

So, Eleanor is going all right. As a whole, it’s going really well. I’m happy where it’s heading. The ending is the tricky part though. I have been working on it quite a bit this last week, but I’m still undecided about a few things.

I’m meeting the goals so far, which is great because I will be heading off early February to see The Book of Mormon in Melbourne! I am absolutely tempted to write solely of my Melbourne adventures (a trip to The Cornish Arms is definitely on the plate – see what I did there?). Perhaps I will. It’s not like anyone can stop me, unless they have a court order (the reason why I can’t sing Wuthering Heights in public anymore).

Back to Eleanor. There is so much I want to reveal about what’s been going on, and I am so excited about it all, but I know I shouldn’t. I wouldn’t want to spoil anything for my darling readers.That’s right, by reading this you have entered into a binding contract, which means you must read Eleanor once it is published.

I can reveal…
There has been a murder! Ermahgahd! (Insert Twilight Zone theme here).
But whose murder, what kind of murder, and who is the murderer? Not even I know!
Well, of course I know.

I can reveal…
Eleanor has become a bit of an absinthe addict (her favourite drink being Lemercier), which is perfectly understandable given her recent misfortunes, of which there are many.

I can reveal…
There has been some tension between Eleanor and Henry.

I can reveal…
The name of Eleanor’s horse is Gabrielle.

Thanks for keeping up to date with all things Eleanor!

Got a question about Eleanor? Post it below or send a message through the contact form.

Did you miss last week’s post? Check it out here.


Stay tuned for another update. In the meantime…


Want to learn more about my NaNoWriMo project? Check out my Eleanor page

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Check out my writing moods for Eleanor with my Eleanor Spotify playlist

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Eleanor update – Words, words, words

Last week I started a goal tracker with the National Novel Writing Month website, which is very exciting, at least to me. This NaNoWriMo tool will help me stick to my goal of completing my Eleanor manuscript by the end of February. So, while I completed the 50k goal in November, I did not finish a full draft.

So, what’s the plan exactly?
The plan is to get Eleanor to a novel-length manuscript as I am not keen on publishing it as a novella. I have therefore set myself a reasonable goal of 20k words to reach within a month — only 625 words a day.

As you know, I am heading off to Perth in February for my graduation, so I am hoping to reach the 20k before I leave.

I have quite a few blank spaces to fill in my story; missing scenes, etc. I plan to write them up, and flesh out anything else I need to. Also, since starting Eleanor, I have changed my mind a number of times on what I want to happen in the end! Damn my fickleness! So, obviously, I will need to make an executive decision on what I will do.
If my characters let me!

A visual (for I am not articulate enough to describe a graph of my toilings):

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Goal tracker word count: 2,796
Total word count: 57,524
End goal: 74,728


Stay tuned for another update. In the meantime…

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Want to learn more about my NaNoWriMo project? Check out my Eleanor page

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What you’ve missed – Day 28 of NaNoWriMo

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Word count: 50,337

I’ve made it! I’ve crossed the finish line! In roughly 25 days, I hit the 50,000 word goal for National Novel Writing Month. It feels great, especially as I never anticipated I’d finish, at least not when I first began. Yet, I told myself I would commit to Eleanor, stick to the daily goals at the very least, then hope that something would come from it.

At 2am November 26: There seems to be a slight discrepancy however between my personal word count with Word and the word count with NaNoWriMo. I’m not certain why there is such a difference. I actually finished on 50,131. I can only assume that perhaps it counts hyphenated words as two words, for example…? Not sure.

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Today:
As you can see, my work has slowed down. However, I will continue working on Eleanor until the 30th – I want to keep adding to my word count. NaNoWriMo has been a wonderful motivational tool, so I want to take advantage of it for as long as I can!

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Thank you to everybody who supported me throughout NaNoWriMo, and to everybody who continues to support me. It has been a blast, and I can’t wait to do it again next year. If you’re thinking about giving it a go, definitely go for it 🙂

So, what now?
I will be revising my work, but before that, I think I will spend some more time relaxing… The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt-style!

In December things will be quite chaotic, as you can understand. Everything will slow down again, but I aim to get Eleanor to a publishable standard very, very soon. I am also considering my options, ie traditional vs self-publishing. I think it will come down to the potential of the book.

And, of course, I feel as though I am neglecting my other works in progress: A Travesty and Wings of Malice.

Coming up?
I will also post up my Eleanor playlist, so you can see (and listen to) everything I had playing whilst trying to write. Much of it proved as a hindrance, actually. It’s hard to listen to your favourite songs and not sing along.

Also, the Blue Fringe Arts Literature event is coming up soon, which is very exciting as it was not going to run this year. I have submitted a work, and will be attending.


For now…

From this week’s playlist:

Björk – Army of Me
Imperia – Fragile
The Superjesus – Shut My Eyes
Battle Beast – Black Ninja
Aesma Daeva – D’oreste D’adjace
Kate Bush – Wuthering Heights

What you missed on social media (including all the boring bits):

Dalmatian puppy getting a massage!


If John Hurt had a cat coming out of his chest, he would have at least been happy in his final moments in Alien.

A little bit of Community

A moment of crisis!

More Witcher, of course!

And a discovery!

Bad Sex in Fiction Awards. Never knew there was such a thing, and I can’t be certain that I am better for knowing about it now.

Because there were two articles on it… and some discrepancy.

Again, thank you so much to everybody who sent me love and support during this project!

Want to learn more about my NaNoWriMo project? Check out my Eleanor page.

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What you’ve missed – Day 21 of NaNoWriMo

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Word count: 40,098

Things are certainly coming together now. Only 10k more words to go, and I am confident I will finish NaNoWriMo early 🙂

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I was hoping to reveal more about my story, Eleanor, but it seems there isn’t much I can reveal without giving away too many of the plot points.

But I can share with you the wrap cover for Eleanor!

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Part One: roughly 10,000 words. As you can see, I did not work on Part One at all last week, but I will go back to it this week.
Part Two: roughly 12,000 words. Eleanor and Henry have been getting closer. Eleanor has also begun classes at the university, much to the displeasure of her sister, Vivienne.
Part Three: roughly 16,000 words. Things have gotten dark, like seriously dark, especially for Eleanor and Vivienne.
Part Four: between 1,000 and 2,000 words. The exciting conclusion, and a “Whoa! What?” feeling.

Fingers crossed I can reveal more next week, after I’ve tied up some loose ends.


For now…

Eleanor, you’ve lost me…

The Smashing Pumpkins – Vanity

This one hasn’t been stuck in my head that much, though I must admit that my love for The Smashing Pumpkins is enough to warrant a post ❤

Know any other songs with ‘Eleanor’ in the lyrics? Post them below.

From this week’s playlist:

Within Temptation – And We Run
Silverchair – Emotion Sickness
Heavenly – Carpe Diem
Fleetwood Mac – Rhiannon
The Cure – Lovesong
Super Castlevania IV – Cellar

What you missed on social media (including all the boring bits):

Music!

Chills, and brought to tears. This is my all-time favourite song, and I would go so far as to say it is the greatest song ever.

The cute!

And National Black Cat Day!

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And… more Witcher 3: Wild Hunt cosplay!

Absolutely love this Ciri costume. It looks amazing! ❤

And Triss Merigold! ❤

By the way, if you haven’t played the game… seriously get onto it! Without a doubt The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt is my all-time favourite game. There is a reason why it has won over 800 awards!

And, one last thing. To show you NaNoWriMo can be done…

That’s it for this week, I guess! Join me again on the 28th of November for another update 🙂

Want to learn more about my NaNoWriMo project? Check out my Eleanor page.

What you’ve missed – Day 14 of NaNoWriMo

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Word count: 26,855

Things have slowed down this week, but I am happy to say that I am still meeting the NaNoWriMo daily goals. And… I have hit the halfway mark!

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The journey so far with Eleanor.
As predicted, I have not been sticking to my original plan of working on each Part within a designated period. That’s still part of a plan though, right? I mean, I knew I wouldn’t stick to a plan, therefore I have inadvertently stuck to a plan of not sticking to a plan. Ah huh!
How about I just break it down, so you know how I’ve been working?
Part One: roughly 10,000 words. It still needs some work, particularly on the opening paragraph. I know what I want to write, it’s just a matter of getting my fingers to type what my brain wants… or, being as articulate as I want to be. In other words, I’ll never get it the way I want it, because I am a perfectionist.
Part Two: between 5,000 and 6,000 words. This is the Part I have been neglecting the most. I think because it is one of the more riskier chapters. I suppose that is something you will understand more upon reading it!
Part Three: between 10,000 and 11,000 words. This Part is my pride and joy, etc. Although I am nowhere near my goal yet (I am hoping to reach roughly 20,000 words), this is the Part where everything happens. This is the Part where you will say, “Cadence, why are you doing this to me? Do you hate me? Why can’t your characters be happy?”
“Mwahahahaaa!” is what I will say in return, should I actually hear you speak those words.
Part Four: zip! Nothing yet. Apparently, I am sticking to my initial goal with this one! I will attempt to start something on this Part during the week, but I would like to get more definitive answers to some of the questions throughout the story before attempting this Part. I am certainly not going for a Scooby-Doo ending, with the revelation in your face. That’s not to say it is a murder mystery though.
Maybe I shouldn’t have mentioned Scooby-Doo?

Okay, but where is the story at now?
It’s getting to the tricky part now, where I obviously don’t want to reveal too much, but I will try. I mentioned how my characters are unhappy at the moment. That is true. Eleanor and Vivienne have faced some misfortune, though I cannot specify what kind and in what way. Let’s just focus on Part Two for now…
Eleanor has been spiralling into a depression, but Henry has found a way to get her back into the anatomy classes.
As you know, Vivienne has received some happy news (see, I’m capable of writing happy things!)
Henry has, in his own way, declared his love for Eleanor.
Unfortunately, as I have neglected Part Two in favour of writing Part Three, I do not have much to reveal. Sorry about that!

But I will have a lot more to reveal next week, regarding Part Three. And should I write more on Part Two, I will make sure to fill you in with the details.


For now…

The Turtles – Elenore

Just another song I’ve had playing over and over in my head whilst trying to write. Again, love this song, so there’s no problem there.

Though… that one line always gets me, “You’re my pride and joy et cetera” XD

Know any other songs with ‘Eleanor’ in the lyrics? Post them below.

This week on my playlist (well, just some of the songs I’ve been listening to):

Babymetal – KARATE
Buffy the Vampire Slayer: Once More, With Feeling soundtrack
Foo Fighters – See You
Edenbridge – Fallen From Grace
Tarja Turunen – I Walk Alone
White Town – Your Woman

What you missed on social media (including all the boring bits):

Food!

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Cute!

Gaming!

Coffee overdose

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And… election depression

But let’s remember the good times…

 

That’s it for this week, I guess! Join me again on the 21st of November for another update 🙂

Want to learn more about my NaNoWriMo project? Check out my Eleanor page.